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Afraid To Dive |
Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
Afraid To Dive Afraid to dive into the depths of my intensity instead you casually stroll along the sandy coast looking blindly and haphazardly for complexity. You fail to notice me caressing your energetic desires softly yet with intensity each moment a breath of fire. It's now and always my passions rock your tide until you see the reining sunrise with me by your side. |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Oooh, this is so beautiful, love the feel of it! |
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Beverly Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 123New Mexico |
This is so well written. Even thought the message is "hey, notice me", you keep it in a positive manner. Great work. Keep posting! |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
I agree! Beautiful work! I especially like the part where you mentioned a breath of fire...kinda reminds me of--well, me! Keep up the great work! Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful imagery! I like this a lot. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Me too! This is another excellent piece of writing, Nursie!! Denise |
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