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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Look at them playing, the small boy and his dog. Running through fields, crossing the stream on a log. You can hear the laughter carrying for miles around, the joy and the love echoing with every sound. They romp in the grass and play catch with a ball. They run and he laughs, the dog leaps and they fall. The small boy and his dog together for all to see, rejoicing in their friendship, no closer friends can there be. Listen to them laughing, this lively little pair, wandering through the days, new experiences to share. They'll be friends for a lifetime, together until the end, the small boy and his dog, the small boy and his friend. An attempt at light-hearted poetry. |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
"Attempt"? I'd say you succeeded, childomine! This is great!!  Kinda makes me want to go out into a big sunny field and do crazy stuff...lol  I liked this a lot! You do a good job with the light stuff (and a lot of other things too). Keep 'em coming!  Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is absolutely delightful! Denise |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
a well done attempt...i could see tehm playing in the grass...this is great...made my rememeber my son when he was small playing with his puppy. seems like only yesterday take care, janet marie ...there are places inside all our souls... that have never been touched... there are places inside our hearts... that need to be loved this much... Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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Beverly Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 123New Mexico |
"...rejoicing in their friendship..." makes my heart just melt! Great poem. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
This is no attempt ! This is very good ! |
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William P Bussey Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 188 |
What a beautiful picture you paint, as we get older, this scene becomes very touching, I really enjoyed this. Bill |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
ohhhh now you've gone and done it...made me cry! lol this was so cute...i have five dogs and i know that the saying "dog is man's best friend" is sooo true. loved this, want to read more! Amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Sasikat Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290St. Petersburg, FL |
Childomine, I sure can relate to this one, having four lifelong friends of my own. Great poem, especially for animal lovers to relate to.Sheila |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
You paint a lovely 3D picture. |
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