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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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If Only's...Senryu Mind's eye stores the truth. Hidden words between the lines Reveal "if only's". Maureen |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Hi Moon .........Can't sleep again hey.....still it at least supplies me with great verse  ......lovely one.....Jon PS...I find the album 'Sacred Spirit'music of the north american Indians is a good one for drifting off to.... |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
yes Jon, you caught me again, awake too early I had a bit of a problem last Friday night here and it left me in some pain..so I have been trying and hoping ice packs would relieve the aching...maybe today will be the beginning of the good feelings..but I can only hope...thanks for reading my small contributions...I did write a longer one in Open for a change...  Maureen |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
MMoonChild, how real are these feelings- and how easy the regrets of past and wasted opportunities- Your little verse speaks volumes--oh heart when will you learn? David WOW- another day of life-and here among friends! Ain't God Grand! |
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Mmoonchild, It's simply incredible how so few words can say so much. Terrific. Bonnie |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Maureen~ Very nicely done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Maureen, Missed opportunites may have regrets but bad choices also have regrets, we must seek a healthy balance. Good senryu. Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
David...no regrets...just some wasted years hidden by lies...if only had been known... thanks for responding Maureen |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
I'm sorry for the wasted years and the lies, but hope you also found strength to overcome the "if only's". Very thought-provoking work. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Maureen~ Oh Wow, very well expressed and poignant! Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Bonnie Marge Dennis Marilyn and Melissa...thank you all for your responses...I would have liked to have responded to each but time and health is not allowing me to do so at the moment... ~~soft hugs and thanks again Maureen |
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