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Solstice Son
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since 2000-09-19
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0 posted 2000-10-03 07:17 PM


" it seems you love a shadow "
thats what I heard the doctor say
" she sounds like a lovely thing,
though of the dark and slave."

" does she know she lives in darkness? "
i heard his question made
i shrugged, and shook my heartsick head
' she's only seen some tainted light,
it explains why she's a slave '

he nods and makes another query
" and what of Judgement Day? "
' that's what really worries me,
i know the price she'll pay '

" what have you planned on doing then? "
" what plans has your heart made? "
' i pray that soon the holy Light
will ransom out this slave '

" that's good to hear , for her and you
perhaps the light she'll see
it may takes years you know
before her soul is free "

' i know, and it breaks my heart
to know she lives each day
shroud in darkness, bound in chains
so used to life in chains '

' still, i'm there, a tiny mirror
a candle in her night
she said she loved me, heart and soul,
me, a creature of the Light '

" she's in love with you? amazing.
but what kind of love has she?
she's never known your kind of love
she can't until she's free "

' i know that's why it hurts Doc,
you know that's why i came '

and then i tear my eyes away
my face verdant now with shame
my cheeks are stained with teardrops
my heartbeat still...with pain

' should we go on talking?
if not, how should i explain?
i want to save her soul from death
and i can't if i'm away '

" the Light has ways , my boy
so fine that you can't see
so trust, obey, and do what's right
and pray her soul's set free "

' you know that i could love her Doc,
the way that she loves me '
" i know son, there's no cure for that
no remedy from me "

i stand to go, still saddened
for my Beloved's not yet free
' so Doc, how much this time? '
" no charge son, i've got this one...

just don't stop until she's free "


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Lady Lost
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since 2000-07-13
Posts 470

1 posted 2000-10-04 06:28 PM


Wow..this is really amazing.  I used to be that girl, and I know from experience that she is the only one who holds the key to the prison she is locked in, no one else
~no matter how much they love her and try~ can set her free.  When she releases her self, all those who waited lovingly outside will be her diamonds in the dust.  Great post.....beth

"And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..."
- REA

Wesley the Blue
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since 1999-09-02
Posts 426
Forest Lake, MN, USA
2 posted 2000-10-04 06:43 PM


I realy liked this one, its so sad, and yet shows glimerings of hope at the same time.  I also liked the title "Dr. Lovemaker"  great work.

Keith W. Mullin

Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you.


blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO
3 posted 2000-10-05 12:37 PM


It is a very complicated corner that your woman seems to be stuck in.  Give her hope and love, everything you can, but it will still be she who holds the key to her hope.
Good luck, I hope that she soon finds the way you both want her to follow.
Hope,
Alicia A. Renzelman

Solstice Son
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since 2000-09-19
Posts 469

4 posted 2000-10-05 07:08 PM


thank you all...she....she is a dear sweet gal...beloved to be sure...her life as it stands now...is not in question of being lost...but still I will wonder and concern myself..for the future can be a clouded and undiscernable thing....but ....I have always been one to hope  
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