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MMoonchild
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0 posted 2000-10-03 11:26 AM

Time Lapse

Momentary lapse
Moon fades before sun's rising
Hidden in day's myst.

M *2k

Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

1 posted 2000-10-03 03:03 PM

Mysty dawns hold magic.........and tiny footprints of hope.

Beautiful

jon

MMoonchild
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2 posted 2000-10-03 04:13 PM

thank you Jon...the curious in me checked out http://www.bluefrogmusic.com

and enjoyed listening to a few songs...

soothing voices
~~soft smiles
Maureen

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

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3 posted 2000-10-03 05:36 PM

MMoonchild,

OOOooOOooo.. I like this alot!

~~Tara aka rp25 :o)

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2000-10-03 07:19 PM

Maureen~
Enjoyed the write of this one.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

MMoonchild
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5 posted 2000-10-03 08:26 PM

rp25 ...glad you liked

~~smiles
M

Chanson
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

6 posted 2000-10-04 01:56 AM

I can feel the anticipation in this one, Maureen. Even on a cloud-filled day,
we know the sun is there

< !signature-->

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-me, Song of Gesture

[This message has been edited by chansondegeste (edited 10-04-2000).]

Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

7 posted 2000-10-04 03:16 AM

Hey so now you've heard my grumpy old voice as well........shucks

aint no secrets now days!

Jon

[This message has been edited by Jon Mewett (edited 10-04-2000).]

MMoonchild
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8 posted 2000-10-04 04:36 AM

well you can hear my voice if you like, only I don't sing that well
http://www.geocities.com/mmoonchild1/audioitismy.html

~~smiling an early morning smile
Maureen

MMoonchild
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9 posted 2000-10-04 04:39 AM

thanks Marge..some days very little comes to my mind...

Chanson~ as always I appreciate your visits and responses

~~soft hugs
Maureen

Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

10 posted 2000-10-04 04:42 AM

Wow.........your speaking voice is much better than my singing voice MM.....the poem you are reciting is rather beautiful as well...what a great idea.....to speak your poetry...are you doing any more?

Jon

MMoonchild
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11 posted 2000-10-04 04:54 AM

http://www.geocities.com/Paris/Musee/5110/mypoempage.html

the first set of poems are all audios...as I was a poet of the month on a site a year ago and had to learn to do that for it...they are slow loading though and I had to do certain ones within a time period alloted until I realize how I can do my longer ones...I hope you enjoy them...just hit next or back..I need to work on my pages soon..I have written over 1000 poems since last year and obviously some of my best are not on here...
thanks for listening to me..*s
Maureen

is early here but I couldn't sleep tonight...

Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

12 posted 2000-10-04 05:07 AM

I surely will listen to more......I'm just going back into the studio today to final mix our next offering....unlike the previous Service album this is more mainstream...I really enjoy your stuff...hey get back to sleep now.......zzzzzzzzzzzzz

Jon

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