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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA 
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Glide in thermals breath needing not the pulse of wings to know freedoms flight |
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Outstanding Ellie, simplicity at it's finest!!!!!!!!!  Bonnie |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Yes, and I do love watching them. Very nice. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
wonderful Ellie .........really something Jon |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
"to know freedoms flight" Lovely  There are enough colours in the world, To paint your own dreams, You won't get them, Till you try. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Very well written! I love this one! Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
beautiful...Ellie..to be able to soar like that...sighhhhing Maureen |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
OOPPPSSS hehe sorry bout the double post. [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 10-03-2000).] |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
ellie, I have agree with Moonchild and sigh. Wonderful haiku  < !signature-->~~Tara aka rp25 [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 10-03-2000).] |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
To soar to the wind's power is pure freedom. You say it so well, ellie ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -me, Song of Gesture |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Ellie, Beautiful imagery here laced with skillful poetic expression. Well done! Dennis :^)< !signature--> Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) [This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 10-08-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ellie~ Very well portrayed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
ellie- very beautiful. love this. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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