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Hummingbird - Haiku

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2000-10-01 08:53 PM

Tiny fairy flight
Magic invisible wings
humming joyfully

[This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (edited 10-01-2000).]

Moon Dust

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since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

1 posted 2000-10-01 08:59 PM

I can see fairy dust round this one

There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.

BSC

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since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

2 posted 2000-10-01 09:41 PM

Another beautiful little gem Ellie, I believe I too can detect fairy dust! Bonnie

Sipping the nectar
From petunias in summer
hum sweet little bird.

Ethan Halo
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since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

3 posted 2000-10-01 09:48 PM

a very soothing haiku.
"magic invisible wings"
well penned.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2000-10-01 10:48 PM

Ellie~

A most pleasing sight
Flower holds the sipping cup
Hummingbird hovers

*Such a joy to see and feel the inspiration.
Thank you.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

5 posted 2000-10-01 11:53 PM

What can I say? It's beautiful!

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Jon Mewett
Senior Member

since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

6 posted 2000-10-02 03:04 PM

A little delicate beauty....lovely

Jon

Jon Mewett
Senior Member

since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

7 posted 2000-10-02 03:04 PM

A little delicate beauty....lovely

Jon

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

8 posted 2000-10-02 04:37 PM

Ellie,

I really like this haiku! You bring the hummingbird to new heights with this

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

9 posted 2000-10-02 08:23 PM

Very pretty, Ellie!

Denise

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