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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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The fog has returned Noiseless, creeping into pores Fills me with numbness. I wait motionless For it's lifting, once again The sun's warmth, to feel. Waiting for the dawn, Cold fingers in morning's chill, Waiting for sunlight. Whispers through the trees, Sunrise over the mountain. My heart is at peace. Morning fog lifting Spirits catching site of words Bringing smile to lips. Each minutes passing Raising thoughts of the morrow Where happiness reigns. *while waiting to post in passions...a response to this was posted elsewhere (the italics) and I responded once more ...thank you Mike... Maureen |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Getting past a depression can be just like a fog lifting from your mind, going "where happiness reigns". Nice images. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Maureen~ A lovely collection of thoughts. Very nicely done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
I think its both hailu and senryu and nicely done too. There are enough colours in the world, To paint your own dreams, You won't get them, Till you try. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi MMoonchild, What ever the form, its pure poetry to me my friend, so very much enjoyed and I am glad to see you, thank you so much for the delightful poetry. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
kcsgrandma...thank you..I returned to my other site and discovered more word play... thought I would share thank you Marge  some days you never know how you will have your spirits liftedthank you Maria for stopping to read  Cerenity..I am glad to see your words also..been a trying few days for me...and I am hoping for a few brighter days {{hugs}} The fog has returned Noiseless, creeping into pores Fills me with numbness. I wait motionless For it's lifting, once again The sun's warmth, to feel. Waiting for the dawn, Cold fingers in morning's chill, Waiting for sunlight. Whispers through the trees, Sunrise over the mountain. My heart is at peace. Morning fog lifting Spirits catching site of words Bringing smile to lips. Each minutes passing Raising thoughts of the morrow Where happiness reigns. Sunlight streaming down, Bathing my face in beauty. The bud awakens. Grown to life inside, A tiny smile comes of age, Bursting from my lips. Day began with smile Warmth continued to follow Led by wishful thoughts. Sun's descent begins Leaving coolness in it's place To refresh my charge. Clouds, glowing colors Calm and soothe my restless soul. Stars replace the clouds. Shining in soft rays, Ethereal light abounds. My soul gains its rest. Lavender blue skies Seeping into nighttime dreams; A driftng moon sleeps. Morn's early sounds call Chirping songs of a new day Filling me with hope. |
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Panne447 Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 196S.A. TX |
Moonchild, I enjoyed reading these. Since there are emotions or intangibles in each tercet, these would be Senyrus. Very nice images of the day. Panne |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you for responding to these..they are from quite a while ago,under my other name which has been dissolved on here,so I shall respond as nakdthoughts and thank you...for bringing an old poem forward *s ~Wynter/Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
These read beautifully. I am just being introduced to these forms, by you poets, so I will refrain from that discussion. Joyce |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you Joyce..they are Senryu's..I think I knew that back then but because some were of emotion and others a bit of nature I had titled it both...thank you for reading Maureen/Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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