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Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

0 posted 2000-09-28 06:34 PM

Though ways deep ocean song,
Though sweet over washing tones,
Lie deep beneath the ocean floor,
Or deeper still to the core,

Bring in the tide,
Or Bring it out,
Just keep on singing,
your ocean song,

Crease and bubble,
Swirl and sing,
Crashing waves,
So deep within,

Tend to life,
You posscess within,
Keep on moving,
Please dont stop,

Live again another day,
So I may take in your salty touch,
For like the sea,
You sing to me.

There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.

Jon Mewett
Senior Member

since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

1 posted 2000-09-29 04:22 AM

This ie really mystical.....I can feel the waves.....salty glory.

jon

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

2 posted 2000-09-29 05:19 AM

Very well done...

With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

3 posted 2000-09-30 12:27 PM

Maria,

OOoooo.. I like this one! Very.. well..poetic

~~Tara aka rp25 :o)

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

4 posted 2000-10-01 06:12 PM

Thankyou all so much

There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

5 posted 2000-10-01 08:32 PM

Very nice images, Maria! I love the ocean!

Denise

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

6 posted 2000-10-02 03:47 PM

So do I

thanks denise

There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

7 posted 2000-10-09 10:11 PM

Maria, Very nice poem, I enjoyed the images of the ocean tiding through.

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

8 posted 2000-10-10 07:11 PM

Thanks

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.

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