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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2000-09-28 06:34 PM


Though ways deep ocean song,
Though sweet over washing tones,
Lie deep beneath the ocean floor,
Or deeper still to the core,

Bring in the tide,
Or Bring it out,
Just keep on singing,
your ocean song,

Crease and bubble,
Swirl and sing,
Crashing waves,
So deep within,

Tend to life,
You posscess within,
Keep on moving,
Please dont stop,

Live again another day,
So I may take in your salty touch,
For like the sea,
You sing to me.


There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.


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Jon Mewett
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1 posted 2000-09-29 04:22 AM


This ie really mystical.....I can feel the waves.....salty glory.


jon

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2 posted 2000-09-29 05:19 AM


Very well done...  

With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.

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3 posted 2000-09-30 12:27 PM


Maria,

OOoooo.. I like this one! Very.. well..poetic  



~~Tara aka rp25 :o)

Moon Dust
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4 posted 2000-10-01 06:12 PM


Thankyou all so much

There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.


Denise
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5 posted 2000-10-01 08:32 PM


Very nice images, Maria! I love the ocean!

Denise

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6 posted 2000-10-02 03:47 PM


So do I thanks denise

There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.


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7 posted 2000-10-09 10:11 PM


Maria, Very nice poem, I enjoyed the images of the ocean tiding through.  
Moon Dust
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8 posted 2000-10-10 07:11 PM


Thanks

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


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