»
Archives
»
The Corner Pub
»
Love For You ........
| The Corner Pub |
|
Love For You ........ |
|
|
Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Beauty in my life enhance You hold my hand My feelings dance I’m willing here To take a chance Are you? A vision stands before my eyes She’s beautiful My wanting cries My love goes on It never dies For you All the buildings of blue brick From my watch Blue seconds tick Shining brand new Blue steel car In the sky Blue shining star Everything around me Blue That’s what I’d be If I lost you You My love for you I cannot hide My life’s a magic Carpet ride A carousel Revolves inside For you If I ever make You cry I know sometimes I don’t know why But you know your tears I’ll wipe them dry For you So if you let me Sing my song It won’t be short I’ll make it long You look so fine In that silk dress Take it now My warm caress Kiss my tears I’ll right all wrong For you Jon [This message has been edited by Jon Mewett (edited 09-28-2000).] |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Jon Mewett - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Ohhhhhh so beautiful Jon!!!! Bonnie |
||
|
Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Jon, A beautiful declaration of love and commitment! WELL DONE! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
||
|
Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Ummmm......well....okay I'll just cut to the point WILL YOU MARRY ME? just kiddin, seriously you are extremely romantic, I hope she realizes how wonderful and rare that is. I really enjoyed this , jon  ......beth "And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..." - REA |
||
|
kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Glad you reconsidered! It is enough to win any lady's heart, I think. |
||
Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
wow this is so beauiful. There are enough colours in the world, To paint your own dreams, You won't get them, Till you try. |
||
|
Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
 Hey Jon, you have any brothers? Just joking... The lady's very special to have you in her life.  Good luck to the both of you. With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
||
|
Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
This Owl as been sitting on this branch just watching the world go by......and hooting a little bit......and one day he caught a glimpse of the spring dawn and was really excited....but then he realised he was happy being an owl........but he so enjoyed the robins singing. He treasured their song forever. Thanx for singing to the Owl everyone  Jon |
||
|
Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Ahhh Jon...this is beautiful with such devotion! It's good to see you pen a love poem, where's mine?! LOLTake care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
||
rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Jon, I swear I left a reply for this.. but I guess I must be going crazy!  So I can you tell you now that I liked this poem even more than I did the first time I read it Well done.< !signature--> ~~Tara aka rp25 [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 09-30-2000).] |
||
|
dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
ah .. love, so simply complicated.....*sigh....* (i'm trying to play it cool...this one really got me in the heart! )beautiful jon...this is just simply beautiful...what a woman she must be..what a man are you...wow..! hugs, dg< !signature--> theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 09-30-2000).] |
||
|
Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Wow all these hugs and things are quite intoxicating.........makes me want to {{{{{{{{{{{{{SHAKE}}}}}}}}}}}}}....in a nice way..... Thanx All Jon |
||
|
Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Your song resonates beautifully Jon ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -me, Song of Gesture |
||
|
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jon~ You can sing for me any night of the week ! Nice .... really nice. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
||
|
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Me too!! Sing away!! Denise |
||
|
MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
I’ll right all wrong For you what more could someone ask for...very nice Jon ~~softsmiles Maureen |
||
|
Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Emmm EMMM Em.............. When I fall in LURVVVVVVE....it will be FUREVER.......or I'll never fall in LLLLurve......How's that? Maybe not Jon |
||
|
Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Jon, Wow, I say Wow, what you've penned here is fabulously romantic, I love it. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
