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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wind Dancer ~*Marge Tindal*~ Colorful ballerinas, dancing on autumn's wind. Twirling, swirling pirouetting in the wind. The earth is your stage. Dance ballerinas, dance. Swirling, twirling dancing in the wind. The dance too soon over, as the winds subside. Time to put autumn's tutu's aside. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Marge!! Very beautiful!! Denise |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
This is truly lovely, and perfect for this time of year! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ I kind of figured you'd enjoy it. KCS~ Thank you so much. Welcome to Passions In Poetry. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
This is so lovely..and Colorful! I really enjoyed this one, Marge!.......beth "And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..." - REA |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Love this "colorful" piece Marge.... I only wish someone would come and rake up all of those little "tutus!!!" Bonnie |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Wow Marge, this is a perfect colorful Autumn poem! ...and dancing leaves, I can see them flitting in the wind ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -Song of Gesture |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyLost~ Thanks, hon. Bonnie~ LOL ! I know what you mean ! Chanson~ Nice to know you enjoyed the 'flit'. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- this is wonderful! i love it. ...and there you go with those colors again. love and hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Marge, This is beautiful in imagery and presentation! How delightfully you display your wonderful talents. Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
love it Marge..tip toeing away.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ I get such joy in sharing the colors. Glad you like ! Dennis~ Thank you, my friend. Victoria~ Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for the reply. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Now, Marge, you know that I couldn't stay away from passions for long. Especially with you here! I've only been gone about a week and it felt like a year, this place is addictive. I loved this poem, it's so marvelously childlike and so well expressed with that Marge flair! It paints a beautiful picture...what a dance it is! Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ Yeah ..... and your friendship is addictive too ! Thanks for recognizing the childlike playfulness in this piece. The leaves do a scurried little dance across the yard ... like children at play. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
beautiful Marge..you began my day in a colorful way ~~soft thanks Maureen |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Maureen~ Thanks for letting me know. Have a wonderful day ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Marge, You brought a cheerful glowing smile to my face with this poem, thanks for sharing it here with us. |
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