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Autumn Haiku Collection part 2 |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. ![]() |
Leaves dance in the breeze < !signature-->Released from Summers’ firm grasp Parachute to ground High and noble shade Pride of swelt’ring August days Discarded on ground .................................................... Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) [This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 09-28-2000).] |
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Elizabeth![]() ![]()
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Your haikus are beautiful. I like the pictures of autumn leaves you painted in these ones. Elizabeth Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near... [email protected] |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Parachuting leaves........how brilliant is that.....terrific Dennis. Jon |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Magnificent imagery! Love, Sis |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Dennis I agree with lil sis. Excellent imagery in this one. I can picture the dancing leaves parachuting to the ground. Garfield |
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Moon Dust![]() ![]()
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
another good one, your so good at haikus ![]() There are enough colours in the world, To paint your own dreams, You won't get them, Till you try. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I love both! But my favourite is the first haiku! ![]() ![]() Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Dennis, You can say so much with so little. Excellent job ![]() ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I agree with the others, wonderful imagery here ![]() |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Dennis --- Have you been in my yard????? You certainly painted it beautifully! Bonnie |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
such vivid descriptons...simply dig the line "parachute to ground" ![]() |
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