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Autumn Haiku Collection, part 1 |
Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Multicoloured trees Colours dance on falls canvas Soon to fade to white A rainbow collage Kaleidoscopic Autumn Fades as frost invades .................................................... [This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 09-27-2000).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I love autumn. Wonderful work with all of these. Elizabeth Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near... [email protected] |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Fall takes on a new splendour Dennis. Jon |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
You make fall into a magical time of year! Sis |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Dennis This was great. I love all the seasons, but it's something about Spring and Autumn that brings out the beauty in nature. You have done an excellent job here. Garfield |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Love these Dennis, unfortunately they TOO soon fade to white.... Bonnie |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Could just see a picture slowly merging into autum. Lovely There are enough colours in the world, To paint your own dreams, You won't get them, Till you try. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
My favorite season..very nice |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow Dennis, you have an amazing way with words, these haikus are so captivating and unique. Well done! I loved the line "kaleidoscopic Autumn" Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Dennis, Just beautiful ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Oh, these are so great! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dennis~ This are exceptionally lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
I have to add my kudos. You really have mastered this form. Very nice images here. And there are lots of dancing colors right now here in the frozen north. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Dennis, lovely Autumn Haiku! I can relate to the frost as we had our first frosty morning (in PA) on Friday. ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -me, Song of Gesture |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Beautiful Dennis..I am still waiting for the leaves to change to those beautiful colors here...won't be too much longer Maureen |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
I liked |
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