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Dennis L. White
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0 posted 2000-09-27 09:13 PM


Multicoloured trees
Colours dance on falls canvas
Soon to fade to white


A rainbow collage
Kaleidoscopic Autumn
Fades as frost invades

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[This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 09-27-2000).]

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1 posted 2000-09-27 10:02 PM


I love autumn. Wonderful work with all of these.

Elizabeth


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Jon Mewett
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2 posted 2000-09-28 04:13 AM


Fall takes on a new splendour Dennis.

Jon

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3 posted 2000-09-28 06:37 AM


You make fall into a magical time of year! Sis
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4 posted 2000-09-28 09:17 AM


Dennis
  This was great.  I love all the seasons, but it's something about Spring and Autumn that brings out the beauty in nature.  You have done an excellent job here.


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5 posted 2000-09-28 09:28 AM


Love these Dennis, unfortunately they TOO soon fade to white.... Bonnie
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6 posted 2000-09-28 06:09 PM


Could just see a picture slowly merging into autum. Lovely

There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.


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7 posted 2000-09-28 10:04 PM


My favorite season..very nice  
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8 posted 2000-09-29 09:52 AM



Wow Dennis, you have an amazing way with words, these haikus are so captivating and unique.  Well done!  I loved the line "kaleidoscopic Autumn"

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


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9 posted 2000-09-30 12:20 PM


Dennis,
  
     Just beautiful

~~Tara aka rp25 :o)

Lakewalker
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10 posted 2000-09-30 05:33 PM


Oh, these are so great!
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11 posted 2000-09-30 11:27 PM


Dennis~
This are exceptionally lovely.
~*Marge*~


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12 posted 2000-10-01 12:42 PM


I have to add my kudos.  You really have mastered this form.  Very nice images here.  And there are lots of dancing colors right now here in the frozen north.

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- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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13 posted 2000-10-01 07:46 AM


Dennis, lovely Autumn Haiku!  

I can relate to the frost
as we had our first frosty
morning (in PA) on Friday.

...chanson~

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14 posted 2000-10-02 05:23 AM


Beautiful Dennis..I am  still waiting for the leaves to change to those beautiful colors here...won't be too much longer

Maureen

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