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JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
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Wisconsin USA

0 posted 2000-09-26 04:03 PM


The good times out weigh the bad
And rightly so
Because
Who lives a life full of misery
And thanks God for that strife?
Amongst the rotton, the unfair, the bad
I want to see the good times
The smile, the laugh, the calm, the sleepy times
No, I need to, to appreciate my life.

© Copyright 2000 Kristen Joy Jacobus - All Rights Reserved
kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
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Presque Isle, ME
1 posted 2000-09-26 05:56 PM


A lot of whether times are good or bad is in the way we look at them, isn't it?  I'm glad your good times outweigh the bad.  You do need that to make life bearable.
Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
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2 posted 2000-09-27 03:00 AM


Nice poem.......good point.


jon

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3 posted 2000-09-28 06:47 PM


I think the bad times make you apperiate the good times more, lovely poem

There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.


JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
4 posted 2000-09-28 10:34 PM


Thanks for replying. I'm not proud of this poem. It's very bad and I'm sorry I posted it. I apologize. Also I apologize for not replying to all your great poems everyone. I'm just busy with school. I have a big load this year. Thanks for understanding.

Joy

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