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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2000-09-22 07:35 PM

Stealth of misty fall,
lurks in cool mornings
wealth of harvest times
ripening splendor.
Stealing the warm breath
of summer.
Exhaling instead,
frosty eves,
that creep upon
leafy canopies of green,
repainting their beauty,
into a bright farewell.
The winds of fall
begin singing their
closing hymn.
Blowing the hymnal pages
of bright colored notes.
As the yellow and orange
wonders flit and twirl,
on the song of falls
final chords,
they sing a song
of farewell,
and dance the dance
of the butterflies
of fall.

Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

1 posted 2000-09-22 07:44 PM

Dear ellie, This is wonderful. It seems I just repeat myself to you.

Your poetry well is deep & your pen, overflowing, with these beauties. marcy

"Stealing the warm breath
of summer.
Exhaling instead,
frosty eves,
that creep upon
leafy canopies of green,
repainting their beauty,
into a bright farewell."

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-09-22 08:09 PM

Beautiful, Ellie!

Denise

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

3 posted 2000-09-22 08:39 PM

Ellie,
Such beautiful imagery and imagination splashed magically with wonderful colors! What a delight to read.
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

BSC

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Member Elite

since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

4 posted 2000-09-22 08:46 PM

Oh Ellie what a beautiful autumn painting you have brushed with your magical pen. This is just breathtaking. Bonnie

Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

5 posted 2000-09-23 03:03 AM

Your verse as beautiful as the Butterfly softly flutters and like a summers breeze drifts away.

I am left with a gentle but lasting impression that promises the spring.

Wonderful

Jon

deleeme
Senior Member

since 1999-10-09

Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

6 posted 2000-09-23 12:25 PM

Oh Ellie,
You were inspired to write this one!!! It is most eloquent and colorful in your bold use of imagry to capture the beauty of this glorious transitional season. All I can say is: BRAVO! Write On, Sis! David

WOW- another day of life-and here among friends!
Ain't God Grand!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2000-09-24 05:51 PM

Ellie~
What a lilting little piece.
Butterflies flutter-bye
Leaves - leave
Fall - falls

Just lovely, lovely thoughts.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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