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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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The Wise Man Knows Her eyes cautiously perched... upon his ceiling. Reeling in the gum ball mutter.... he's dealing. Sometime in a formally dressed up lie... the moment gleamed within a corner... of his eye. Dealt a memory of past... house of cards folded. Together through friendship the years... they molded. Sets of crayons, too many... to color rainbows. Too few they'd say, that only... the wise man knows. |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Nice one LD this as got me thinking....I'll be back shortly........ Jon |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
pretty deep stuff dreamer.. i really like this...great writing! hugs,dg "i'm growin'/ i dont like it/ i'm growin' and it hurts/ i love you/ but i'm tired/ i guess i've got a lot to learn..." -w. watson |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
wow...this is most definitely a thinker. i like it...alot.  -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
OUCH no fair you setting the rusty cogs in my brain spinning and making me think... excellent piece, has me pondering read twice adding filing it in my library. Plan to return and ponder some more. The softest thing in the world Will overcome the hardest.Non-being can enter where there is no space". Taoist saying [This message has been edited by brian madden (edited 09-19-2000).] |
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