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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
the human body- such warmth... such power a single touch and i am healed- cleansed of emotional pain a tender embrace and the chains that bound my heart are melted away a touch of acceptance- a touch of love for life without touch is not life at all- a mere existance in a lonely and frightening world -vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 09-19-2000).] |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
vlraynes, You've hit the nail on the head with this one! I love this! ~Sheri |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
*blinks* Oh wow.... This is very, very good...and I agree, you have hit the nail on the head with it...Now I"m off to send it as a card..Thankyou so much! With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Touching........true....and beautiful. jon |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
I agree with everyone, I like the way you put it. There are enough colours in the world, To paint your own dreams, You won't get them, Till you try. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
life without touch is no life at all.... I really liked this poem... Parker |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
literally, amazingly, touching. i love this. alicia |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
sheri- thanks so much. glad you like it. broken_winged_angel- wow...what a compliment. thank you so much. so glad you feel this is worthy of being sent as a card. jon- really glad you like this. thanks for reading. maria- thank you so much for reading and responding. glad you like this. parker- so glad you enjoyed this. thanks for the kind response. alicia- thanks so much for the enthusiastic response. really glad you like this. LOVE YOU ALL, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
YES..! this is so true...its amazing what a touch can do..what the warmth of someone being near can do for the soul.. "a single touch and i am healed..." its like laughter on the skin love this one tricks hugs, dg i'm growin' i dont like it i'm growin' and it hurts i love you but i'm tired i guess i've got a lot to learn -w. watson |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ This is wonderful. You stirred lots of thoughts. We are all more - because someone touched us. Lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice! Denise |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Wonderful wisdom....It's true that the loving touch of another is truly lifegiving! This is lovely, Vicky. Love, Ellie |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- yes...touch is definitely a wonderful and powerful thing. ...'laughter on the skin' ...i like that... thanks for reading. glad you enjoyed. Hugs back to you. Marge- thanks so much. glad this got you your mind working. really glad you enjoyed this. Denise- thanks so much. glad you liked it. Ellie- lifegiving indeed. thank you so much for the sweet reply. i appreciate you. love you all, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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