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Jose Marti
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 374
washing DC

0 posted 2000-09-16 12:49 PM


I want to be with you
I long to taste
those lips again

I want to be with you
once more
If only
to die in your arms.

© Copyright 2000 Jose Marti - All Rights Reserved
Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

1 posted 2000-09-16 03:44 AM


Short but kinda powerful.

Like it

Jon

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
2 posted 2000-09-16 11:10 AM


Jose,
  Short, but to the point! I like your directness!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)


dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
3 posted 2000-09-19 12:24 PM


have felt that way before...powerful feelings...

nicely written jose  

hugs, dg


"i'm growin'/ i dont like it/ i'm growin' and it hurts/ i love you/ but i'm tired/ i guess i've got a lot to learn..." -w. watson

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since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK
4 posted 2000-09-19 05:37 PM


love this one sooo sweet

There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.


Jose Marti
Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374
washing DC
5 posted 2000-09-19 11:00 PM


thanks for responding, I was kind of in a writer's block, and these words were the only ones that came out.
blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO
6 posted 2000-09-20 12:29 PM


I am beginning to feel that, with all of y'all's new talent, I am being left behind in a long trail of gray dust!
Wonderful job!
Alicia

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