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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
I want to be with you I long to taste those lips again I want to be with you once more If only to die in your arms. |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Short but kinda powerful. Like it Jon |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Jose, Short, but to the point! I like your directness! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
have felt that way before...powerful feelings... nicely written jose  hugs, dg "i'm growin'/ i dont like it/ i'm growin' and it hurts/ i love you/ but i'm tired/ i guess i've got a lot to learn..." -w. watson |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
love this one sooo sweet There are enough colours in the world, To paint your own dreams, You won't get them, Till you try. |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
thanks for responding, I was kind of in a writer's block, and these words were the only ones that came out. |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
I am beginning to feel that, with all of y'all's new talent, I am being left behind in a long trail of gray dust! Wonderful job! Alicia |
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