I'll Not Forget ((A thankyou in Haiku form))

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I'll Not Forget ((A thankyou in Haiku form))

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

0 posted 2000-09-13 03:54 AM

    Lips softly kissing,
Eyes gently probing my soul,
    Arms holding me safe.

    Hands, firm yet gentle,
Leading me to confidence,
    Showing me the way.

    Love pouring over
My heart and soul still broken,
    You teach me to heal.

    Letting me go hurts,
But you taught me to fly free.
    Like eagles, I soar...

    Leaving you behind.
You wave, turning to cry,
    Tears silently fall.

    Caged bars would kill me
Locks and chains bind me till death
    None which would you choose.

    Thankyou for knowing
What I could not say to you
    Giving me a gift...

    Of life, happiness...
Untold you knew the secrets
    Locked within my heart.

    I'll not forget this
Act of kindness, understanding..
    Nor your heart of gold.

With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.

gofor42
Member

since 2000-01-23

Posts 143
Arkansas

1 posted 2000-09-13 09:17 AM

I really like this piece...lots of strong, heartfelt sentiment and feeling...great read!

"If you can't annoy somebody, there's little point in writing."
--Kingsley Amis

Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

2 posted 2000-09-13 09:35 AM

BWA,
Tender senryu expression of appreciation of a lover and a friend, Well Done!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

Joannak
Member

since 2000-03-11

Posts 121
Indiana, USA

3 posted 2000-09-13 11:52 AM

Angel, what a wonderful read. I so enjoyed this piece, especially the last stanza.

Joanna

What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury

jenifeather
Junior Member

since 2000-02-21

Posts 31
Here

4 posted 2000-09-13 03:13 PM

this is very sweet, touching and yet sad. i love it.

jennifer

who's gonna pay attention, to your dreams
who's gonna plug their ears, when you scream
-the cars

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

5 posted 2000-09-13 03:17 PM

Sad and beauiful but also moving.

Words flow heavily,
A carbon copy of my heart,
As well as my soul.

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