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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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You possess the very soul of me... Do you know You hold me in the palm of your hand? You have the power to crush me, or to cradle me-- To warm me, or to leave me cold... You dwell within my waking thoughts. You frequent my dreams-- My dreams... I want to see you there. Will you meet me when i close my eyes? Somewhere in the misty corners will you lurk To ensnare me as i stumble past-- To hold me as you whisper, "shhh, Dont speak..." Not now-- the words will wake the moment. Dont speak. Dont answer. Just meet me in the shadows To take my body as well as my soul-- Or gently please return my soul to me... You hold me in the palm of your hand... --dgvarner "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
DgV, WOW! powerful writing here! You grab my attention and don't let go, what a ride! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
its a wild ride dennis..buckle up  love to get a reply from the haiku king  dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
This was great ! Often I find my self wondering how other people seem to have so much control over our emotions and feelings, and stand in awe of the power they posess... |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
oooo this is so romantic and very passionate! sigh! You are such a good poet. love, ellie P.S. I love getting you replies, they are so encouraging! Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- oh yes, a wild ride indeed...rollercoaster ride that is. As always, I love this...feeling every word. love ya, tricks "I have read your words, and within them I have found your heart. -vlraynes |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Seems like someone longing for self-empowerment.... go for it |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
starr: the power of possession is a mighty thing aye... but i guess in truth..we allow ourselves to be possessed..to hand our soul over for the taking..in longing perhaps..in hopes..waiting for dreams to happen..and wanting to help them along...its human! eL: thank you so much!..and i didnt realize my responses were helpful ..nice to know that they are tricks: shh..dont tell him about the roller coaster rides--he might not come back!! lol thanks for reading jamie: empowerment...hmm..yeah, i suppose youre right--a hope of regaining my own soul..my own self..well, unless, he who holds it treats it right..and then he can keep it thanks for all replies friends  dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Yes, this is the type of poem that makes my palms sweat...  Very nice indeed. Parker |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
wow, great poem, now I'm on my way to ensnare you and meet you in the shaddows. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
PARKER: yeah? you like?? thanks!JOSE: ...ok!  heeheethanks for your replies! hugs, dg "i'm growin'/ i dont like it/ i'm growin' and it hurts/ i love you/ but i'm tired/ i guess i've got a lot to learn..." -w. watson |
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