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blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO

0 posted 2000-09-12 12:28 PM


Love is
A hand held
A thought shared
A simple sweet kiss
A warm embrace
A memory
An inside joke
And a smile

Love is
Brushing off the dirt
And the sting of the words
Defense AND offense
Helping her up
Spending the night in each other's arms
The thought of forever
And a warm, fuzzy feeling

Love is
A tear
A shoulder to share it with
A glimpse of hope
A candle in the darkness
A release from the pain
A show of generosity AND greed
And the rest of our lives

Love is
What you and I share


Can't seem to get out of this type of mood.  I guess it's just kind of contagious.  The way I've been writing lately, I really need to get a thesaurus!!!  NEWAYZ, Hope y'all enjoy!
Alicia A. Renzelman

© Copyright 2000 Alicia R - All Rights Reserved
Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

1 posted 2000-09-12 12:56 PM


Love is also sweet gentle poetry .......like this.

You can stay in that mood for me  and write some more.

Jon


Mike
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since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462

2 posted 2000-09-12 02:03 PM


Nice.  Me likes.
Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
3 posted 2000-09-12 02:20 PM


Hi and I love your mood and this poem!  
Moon Dust
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since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK
4 posted 2000-09-12 07:17 PM


Yep dont ever get out of that mood

Words flow heavily,
A carbon copy of my heart,
As well as my soul.

Nicki
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since 2000-09-12
Posts 14

5 posted 2000-09-12 07:43 PM


Thats a good mood to be in I love being it in myself.  Well written poem, very sweet and inspiring.  Love rocks! doesnt it? well I say that now until love hurts me then we'll talk..but for now, good poem>
blackhalo
Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO
6 posted 2000-09-13 12:25 PM


Thank you all so much!  As always, I find your comments inspiring and uplifting.  Nicki, Love Rocks!!!  Jon, thanks so much, I love sweet gentle poetry.  Apparently, I shouldn't ever leave this mood!  Nice to know that you all "likes!"
Alicia

jenifeather
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since 2000-02-21
Posts 31
Here
7 posted 2000-09-13 02:45 PM


this is a great poem. it is a beautiful description. i know i couldn't have said it any better.

Jennifer


who's gonna pay attention, to your dreams
who's gonna plug their ears, when you scream
-the cars

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