4 Seasons haiku (kaile's Challenge)

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4 Seasons haiku (kaile's Challenge)

Moon Dust

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since 1999-06-11

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Skelmersdale, UK

0 posted 2000-09-10 07:10 AM

First lamb sees blossoms,
To warm sea breezes and fall,
Felt the bitter cold.

What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-09-10 02:20 PM

Maria~
This certainly met the challenge well.
I LOVED the 'first lamb' reference.
VERY NICE !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

2 posted 2000-09-10 03:43 PM

Excellent, Maria. So much in so little. Loved how you take the blossoms and look back to the other three seasons. A hard job made to read beautiful, with the stroke of your poetic pen. Love, Marcy

Moon Dust

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since 1999-06-11

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Skelmersdale, UK

3 posted 2000-09-10 07:06 PM

Marge & Marcy thankyou for reading and sharing your thoughts

What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions.

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

4 posted 2000-09-14 11:27 AM

like marge, i liked the first lamb reference too...in addition,the last line caught my attention..made me wonder what happened to the lamb in the end

thank you for responding

Moon Dust

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since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

5 posted 2000-09-14 01:16 PM

Kaile - thanks

Words flow heavily,
A carbon copy of my heart,
As well as my soul.

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