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pegasus111
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0 posted 2000-09-07 11:49 PM


I am the great healer of troubled hearts
the balm that sooths your soul
I am the navigator who charts the path of your life
the physician that treats your tortured mind
do you know who I am?

I am the muse of the nine faces
the truth of a thousand ages
look for me in the stars
in the quiet of a summer day
do you know who I am?

I am everything, I am nothing
I am dreams, I am reality
close your eyes and you will see me
breathe deeply and you will smell me
do you know who I am?

Do you hear me in the silence
touch me in the dark of night
taste me in a loved one's kiss
tremble at the mysterious and unknown
do you know who I am?

I am you
I am them
I am the beginning
I am the end
I am HIM


the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

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kelieth
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1 posted 2000-09-08 12:49 PM


Powerful piece.  



Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

Jon Mewett
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2 posted 2000-09-08 04:41 AM


Very strong.....well written.

Sorta held my attention.

Jon

ellie LeJeune
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3 posted 2000-09-08 06:54 AM


Pegasus; This is glorious.."I am the Alpha and the Omega..." Surely you have give God the glory in this wondrous poem. Bravo! Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

pegasus111
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4 posted 2000-09-08 09:00 AM


would that HE hears my prayer, Ellie..thank you again for your kindness, gentle one.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

pegasus111
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5 posted 2000-09-08 11:14 AM


Kevin, Jon, thank you for the time to respond to my humble ditty..peace

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

gofor42
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since 2000-01-23
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6 posted 2000-09-08 01:21 PM


Wow...I am in awe of this piece.  This is the kind of poem that can truly be described as "divine inspiration."

"If you can't annoy somebody, there's little point in writing."
--Kingsley Amis

wordancer
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7 posted 2000-09-08 01:51 PM


Just wonderful peg, just wonderful, you have created a rare beauty of a poem...a song.

-Lady

pegasus111
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8 posted 2000-09-08 08:15 PM


gofor42..you do me honor..thank you.

Lady..a song that needs to be sung again by both of us.  < !signature-->

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


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9 posted 2000-09-09 07:09 PM


wow, this is expressed in a powerful and beauiful way

What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions.

Marge Tindal
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10 posted 2000-09-09 10:27 PM


Pegasus~
Quite lovely.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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pegasus111
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11 posted 2000-09-11 05:11 PM


Maria, Marge,  thank you...sorry I'm late responding, I've been away...

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

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