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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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I say happiness is like a soap bubble Chase it too hard and it bursts into nothingness Take it too easy and it flutters unseen from you I hope I am the being that fits inside the bubble Enveloped by its overwhelming aura of joy Content to follow whenever it chooses to lead |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
I love the images and bubbles too. I like the way you refered them to hapiness  What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions. |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Kaile, Your creativity keeps bubbling to the surface to our delight! Excuse me, I must go find my old bubble wand, LOL Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
hmm..now thats just cool... i like!hugs, dg< !signature--> "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 09-07-2000).] |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thank all for replying sorry for bumping this up but will appreciate a few more comments before i post this at Critical Analysis...*Gulp* thank you in advance |
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Poertree Senior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359UK |
Hey Kaile this is on its way to CA is it ? Heh heh I’ll be waiting ...just one small point ...........don’t like to mention it really  but maybe you should change the layout of the Title a bit ....lol“My Fervent Desire for Brian” ...sounds a little odd...no?...........~grin~ see ya later Philip |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hi Kaile I say happiness is like a soap bubble Chase it too hard and it bursts into nothingness Take it too easy and it flutters unseen from you How true are these words! I really enjoyed your poem Kaile Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
hmmm...this was written for Brian Madden....well he never got to read this though...*grinz* you are intimdating me, Sir Philip(feeling scared here) but i thank you for your interest and rest assured i will do the best i can before submitting it at CA...LOL thank you [This message has been edited by kaile (edited 11-19-2000).] |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Kaile; I loved the whimsical feel and lighthearted analogy. Very efervescent! Ellie Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
I like this Kaile, the first stanza, especially, but must say I had the same reaction as Philip about the title. Maybe you could put your dedication in another place. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very pretty, Kaile! Denise |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i thank all for reading and replying and that i have revised this and posted it in CA... so if you have any suggestions, any feedback i will be glad to hear them.... also, im not here to get my ego stroked(as if im not bigheaded enough already), blast this to pieces if need be and i will try to come up with a better version THANK ALL  |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Love bubbles, i'm a big kid at heart. I love this too Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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