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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. 
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My words have been halting, Been stumbling over rhyme And the wrong words appear, In the "nick of crime?" How can I expresso, This angst now has hold, Words get all jumbled, Is what purple prefold? I need inspiration, A vacuum I get, Ideas non-existent, A brain straining net? I hope I survive, Before it is known, I'm not really Dennis, But his illiterate clone. |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
lol..I think not, Dennis..you seem to be moving right along..this piece made me smile..nice. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Sparkling comic prince as well as king Hey......clone or not we're laughing. Jon |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Dennis with your poetic muse on such magnificent form you should leave the whining and lamenting to lesser beings like me  thanx for a joyful read |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Oh i know what you mean, btw nicely put ,its horrible when your blocked.But keep trying What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dennis dear this is soooo funny, perchance thy muse is drunk in some corner pub,Ah, there he is, over in the corner. Hey, you, knock off the booze and get back to work over here and start inspiring this dear man! That oughta do it! Love, Sis |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I've sung this tune a time or two! Delightful way of putting it Dennis! Denise |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
LOL  Great piece I believe I've suffered this atrocity. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
LMAO!!  ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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