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MMoonchild
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0 posted 2000-09-06 08:17 AM



Your Eyes

i have missed
your eyes
behind that steel-like
gaze
have missed
their smiling
at the movements
of my lips
that taste
your every word
as my tongue
licks their edges
to catch every drop
savouring
their passion filled flavours

i have missed
your eyes
penetrating
the soft innerfolds
of me
releasing the energy
that is stored
just for you
i watch
as you watch
knowing that
today
i may miss
your eyes
but there will come
a tomorrow...

Maureen(~ve~)
*2k



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Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

1 posted 2000-09-06 08:22 AM


This is beautifully penned because the eyes are so revealing.


Kathleen


Marsha
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England
2 posted 2000-09-06 09:32 AM


Maureen, your work is a beautiful as your soul. The eyes being the windows to the soul, reveal everything. You have my upmost admiration, that what you have gone through has just made you a better poet. You were great anyway, now you're superb. Take care of yourself my thoughts are with you. Warm hugs!  
a_little_girl
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since 2000-05-08
Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA
3 posted 2000-09-06 06:30 PM


You much be very much in love when you write MMoon. It seems as if you are speaking from the soul with you, that place that so few see.
--Little Girl

MMoonchild
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4 posted 2000-09-07 07:19 AM


Kathleen
I actually  dislike the telephone  as I think  one only needs to look into eyes and can read the words of thought
~~soft thanks
Maureen

MMoonchild
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5 posted 2000-09-07 12:59 PM


Marsha

your responses  always warm my heart  
thank you {{hugs}}
Maureen

MMoonchild
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6 posted 2000-09-07 01:02 PM


Little Girl
sometimes in love,  sometimes in pain..but always from my heart...
thank you
~~soft hugs
Maureen

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