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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA 
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At the waters edge little bird runs from the waves seeking sandy lunch |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Thats awesome, I read a lot of haiku here and yours definately gets in there among the best. A great post-card-ish feel, don't you thinK?! |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Sis, I can just see those little feet a flying back and forth racing the waves, LOL I Love this word picture! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
And I thought this was going to be about you and Vince having real Sand-witches while sitting on the beach. But you did not dissappointment me--this offing was delightful. YouR Friend, David WOW- another day of life-and here among friends! Ain't God Grand! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very cute, Ellie!  Denise |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Smiling here Ellie! I loved the picture this left me with ... thank you for this little gem! Best wishes, /Kit |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
masterful as always..I have watched those little sandpipers many times..still give me a kick. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This so great! You haiku very well |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
ellie, this is precious..and I was getting ready to shake sand from my sandwich bag...I should've known better! LOL.. Marcy |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
ellie,moi think this is the best haiku i have seen from you so far...loved this lots!!!! |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
ah I can just see the beach What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions. |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Not bad for a haiku. I just happened to just have lunch now so I thought to pay this poem a visit. --Little Girl |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Love the image here.....really nice. Jon |
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