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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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a little girl came out to play today she ran she jumped she sang she danced she smiled and the sun shone in her eyes she had not a care in the world led by childish innocence she entered a world of imagination and dreams seeing her delight in simple pleasures one could not help but smile for nothing warms the heart more than the precious innocence of a child as the day came to a close the child could not rest not ready to end the adventure but finally she slumbers her mind now dancing with visions of another day Lord embrace this child while she sleeps hold her close keep her safe that she might know how deeply she is loved -vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Great poem. This would be a good childern's poem. Awesome work.  Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Xeonox- Thanks so much for reading and responding. Your kind words of encouragement are greatly appreciated.  -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Wonderful warm poem. loved it. "To the centre of the city where all roads meet, waiting for you,To the depths of the ocean where all hopes sank, searching for you," Joy divison |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very precious poem! Denise |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
What a sweet poem. Such a tribute to the children of the world. Childhood is such time of innocence. Wish all children could have this feeling of innocence.. Dawn |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
A vivid picture of a child, it reminds me of myself when I was young.. - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Brian- Thanks! Glad you liked it. Denise- Thanks for reading. Really glad you liked this. Dawn- Thanks so much for the kind words. This was actually written for a friend of mine who let her inner child come out to play one day. Wish ALL of us could have that kind of innocence. Glad you enjoyed this one. James- Thanks for the kind response. Glad this brought back memories for you. THANKS AGAIN TO ALL OF YOU! Love you all, vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Vicky; I love this poem! You have so beautifully captured the sweet innocents of a child! ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
oh to be that child again!..life was simple, happy, free...the time cannot be matched!  dg"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Oh, this is good! Thanks for sharing, it's so cute |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
ellie- thank you so much for your kind response. really glad you enjoyed this. dg- oh, that little girl is still in there- she just doesn't get to come out and play as much anymore. maybe you could let her out tonight...just until the streetlights come on. LOL Glad you liked. Lakewalker- thanks so much for your response. really glad you liked. Love you guys, -vicky (aka, 'tricks') "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Oh wow. I have a little 5 year old daughter and this really hit home for me. Everynight I lay my hands on her and plead the blood of Jesus over her. Thank you so much for penning this wonderful piece. Juls |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Juls- Thank you so much for the sweet response. I always appreciate hearing from you. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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Brenda Hall Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 88Texas,USA |
I loved your poem! Maybe you should let your inner child show more,so we could get to know her better! Brenda H. |
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Brenda Hall Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 88Texas,USA |
I loved your poem! Maybe you should let your inner child show more,so we could get to know her better! Brenda H. |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Wow, what a beautiful picture you paint with your words, tricks!  I could even see the sunset...yeah, childish innocence, wish I still had some!  I think my girlfriend (who posts here as a_little_girl) would like this one a lot. Great job, as usual! Little Spyro T. Dragon Watching the poets Passions' guardian dragon Moves with the rhymes' flow. Though my body be Human, my heart and soul be That of a dragon. |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
ah those were the days, I feel very old now Nice poem "Those who will not learn to use this instrument well cannot be saved by an expanded alphabet; they will only afflict us with expanded gibberish" ~ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
the urge to let our inner childlike self surface..if only we can do that more often |
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Honey Bunch Member
since 2000-08-08
Posts 99South Africa |
Thank you so much for reminding me of how I used to be...soo very long ago. Lovely poem! |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Very sweet. A beautiful poem that expresses the absolute innocence and heart of a child. I luv this. Alicia |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A beautiful portrait of all children! Wise words indeed, innocence is precious. Carl Sanburg once said "that a child in God's opinion is the reason why the world must go on" Take care, Melissa honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Such a beautiful innocent piece of a childs blissful peace. Enjoyed the poem with the prayer. Beautiful work. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Brenda- Thanks so much for the kind words...rest assured my inner-child is alive and well. Glad you liked this. Spyro- My guardian dragon...thanks so much for the kind words. Your responses always make me smile. ...btw...i'm sure you've got plenty of childish innocence left in you...it's part of what makes you so special. Maria- Thanks so much...really glad you like this. Just remember you're only as old as you feel...so feel young. kaile- So true...my inner-child is alive and well, but she doesn't get to come out and play much...i'll have to work on that. Honey Bunch- So glad this brought back happy memories for you. Thanks so much for reading and responding. Alicia- Thanks so much. You're kind words mean alot to me. There is nothing more precious than the innocence of a child. Glad you enjoyed this. Melissa Honeybee- Thank you for your kind words. The future does definitely belong to the children...we should never forget that. Glad you enjoyed this. Kevin- wow...thanks so much for the kind words. your responses mean alot to me. Glad you enjoyed this. THANKS AGAIN EVERYBODY!! LOVE YOU ALL, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
wonderful poem... a true pleasure to enjoy. |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Lil Spyro was right, I DO like it. The title alone grabbed my attention. --A Little One |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
mike- thanks so much for the response. really glad you enjoyed this. little_girl- hi! thanks so much for reading. your response means alot to me. i've heard a lot of good things about you; and from what i've seen of your poetry, they're all true. really glad little spyro sent you, and reslly glad you like this. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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