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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
When the moon meets the stars, When the dark breathes soft whispers, A shrivelled lonely soul flips pages endlessly, desperately trying to make up for lost time |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
A vivid image you painted, kaile. Yes.....I enjoyed --...chanson~ "Music, when soft voices die, Vibrates in the memory..." P.B. Shelley |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Looking for loopholes or where he got off track and missed much of life's scenic route on the road map of life? Good one Kaile, David WOW- another day of life-and here among friends! Ain't God Grand! |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
A feeling I can relate to...this is a lovely poem. ...beth "And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..." - REA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kaile~ Really neat thoughts. I enjoyed the scenario. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
"when the moon, Meets the stars," love those lines, keep writing. What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions. |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Hey!! We just did that few weeks ago!!! It was the dreaded annual exam period... _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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