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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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The grown child stares hard At the morning glory and Longs for a cuddle |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
grown child am i....  have been in this place many times...hugs to you kaile  dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Yelp! You got my number on this one. Very well done. Marcy |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
(((hug)))...... the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Here a cuddle for writing this beauty! ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Very nice  |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Kaile, Cuddles and big hugs Are far to infrequent now That I am adult I can relate to this! Good one! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
I don't think I need to tell you that you, DONE GOOD. You obviously touched a cord in many people. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
inner child live on your innocence let not die warm cuddles to you love this, kaile. my inner child is still going strong, so i can relate to this one. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thank you everyone..your hugs are very much appreciated now i realise recently that each line of a haiku ought to stand on its own and so have revised this one..hope my menaing is not lost A grwon child stares hard A morning glory winks back Longs to be cuddled |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
yep u deserve a hug for this Words flow heavily, A carbon copy of my heart, As well as my soul. |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
i might be way off here....and forgive my dirty mind...but im certain the kind of cuddles im reading in this, are not the kind like you would give your mom! hahaha...sorry if ive misread, but this poem is putting racey thoughts in my head!  ~Dawn  "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
All of us, young or old, want to cuddle up with someone... just the warmth of a hug, can blow away all troubles. _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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