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Moon Dust![]() ![]()
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Dust may fall though time, Settle deep and thick throughout, But rests here with me. |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
That is why there is An invention known as the Big vacuum cleaner. ![]() Great little senryu, Maria! ![]() Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
If we be from dust And if to dust we return It may seek it's kin! An interesting situation you pose! WOW- another day of life-and here among friends! Ain't God Grand! |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Maria~ ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Maria, was that "through" or "though"?pls entertain moi ![]() the last line sort of jolted me...feels kind of haunting to this reader ![]() |
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Moon Dust![]() ![]()
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Little spyro - Nice one but i'll miss the dust if I did it to often ![]() What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions. |
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Moon Dust![]() ![]()
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Little spyro - Nice one but i'll miss the dust if I did it to often ![]() deleeme- and that we do ![]() Marge- That made me laugh good one ![]() kaile- actully it was suppose to be through, but I like the way though fits in. And yes haunting in a way ![]() What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions. |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Neat!! ^_^ -LC |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Well, we'll just get the feather duster out and keep you dusted off so you can keep writing these gems! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I like this one, great job ![]() |
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Moon Dust![]() ![]()
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Dennis - and write them I will ![]() Lakewalker -thnks too ![]() What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions. |
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