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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA 
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Cinderella me But not to the ball I go clean the bowl instead [This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (edited 09-02-2000).] |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Dear Cinderella Do you need help? This dragon has nothing to do.  Great haiku ellie!! Hope to see more!  Little Spyro T. Dragon Watching the poets Passions' guardian dragon Moves with the rhymes' flow. Though my body be Human, my heart and soul be That of a dragon. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ellie~ Nice Senryu ... Cinderella, girl That bowl doesn't have to be Snow White ! ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Hahahahahaha Ellie, will remember this one when I grab that brush next time. But will Prince Charming forget to put the seat down on his china throne? Bonnie |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
sweet cinderella you're invited to the ball don't flush it away -vlraynes ellie- i love this. really cute...but that bowl is definitely not worth missing the ball over.  -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
my favorite poetess brings smiles today for me..so sorely needed..thanks.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sometimes, I feel like my life is like this too, well written and witty Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Why can't Prince Charming Be instead Mr. Clean, or Mr. Tidy Bowl? Then I'll leave him home Busy cleaning up this mess- And I'll have a Ball! Are these fractured enough(also commercial!)? David WOW- another day of life-and here among friends! Ain't God Grand! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
LOL on this rewritten version....well, wont the fairytale Cinderella be cross to read this? nice humour |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
ellie, LOL! Love it, made me grin big. marcy |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Ellie, Your creative talents never cease to amuse,....er,I mean amaze me, LOL Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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