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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA ![]() |
Cinderella me But not to the ball I go clean the bowl instead [This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (edited 09-02-2000).] |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Dear Cinderella Do you need help? This dragon has nothing to do. ![]() ![]() Little Spyro T. Dragon Watching the poets Passions' guardian dragon Moves with the rhymes' flow. Though my body be Human, my heart and soul be That of a dragon. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ellie~ Nice Senryu ... Cinderella, girl That bowl doesn't have to be Snow White ! ! ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Hahahahahaha Ellie, will remember this one when I grab that brush next time. But will Prince Charming forget to put the seat down on his china throne? Bonnie |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
sweet cinderella you're invited to the ball don't flush it away -vlraynes ellie- i love this. really cute...but that bowl is definitely not worth missing the ball over. ![]() -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
my favorite poetess brings smiles today for me..so sorely needed..thanks.. ![]() the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sometimes, I feel like my life is like this too, well written and witty ![]() Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Why can't Prince Charming Be instead Mr. Clean, or Mr. Tidy Bowl? Then I'll leave him home Busy cleaning up this mess- And I'll have a Ball! Are these fractured enough(also commercial!)? David WOW- another day of life-and here among friends! Ain't God Grand! |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
LOL on this rewritten version....well, wont the fairytale Cinderella be cross to read this? nice humour ![]() |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
ellie, LOL! ![]() |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Ellie, Your creative talents never cease to amuse,....er,I mean amaze me, LOL Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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