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Natures Postcard Haiku |
Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Sunsets blazing sky Glorious colors aflame Natures live Postcard |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Brilliant Another wonderful scene you've shared! [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 08-25-2000).] |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
such vivid pictures contained within the postcard...very true, this one is |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
thanks for sending the postcard Words flow heavily, A carbon copy of my heart, As well as my soul. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dennis; Lovely postcard, don't they usually say "wish you were here", but they really don't mean it? beautifully done, your majesty! Love, Sis Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Perfect autumn piece Dennis, all it needs is the stamp. Bonnie |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This is definately your best haiku yet! I love "nature's live postcard" - what a beautiful way to see it Amazing, Dennis Take care, Melissa honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
cool! what a concept! signed by the big man and all!! great one dennis hugs, dg "i'm growin'/ i dont like it/ i'm growin' and it hurts/ i love you/ but i'm tired/ i guess i've got a lot to learn..." -w. watson |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Thanx for the card Dennis....it's the quickest one ever delivered.. Jon |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
This is some good stuff, Jon. I could see the sun as you had described it in your poem. --Little Girl |
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