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Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2000-08-25 08:41 AM


He LOves to Kiss

He loves to kiss the ones he loves
And so he is the master of
The sweetest kiss there ever was
He gives out kisses just because

Around a kiss he lives his life
He kisses children in their strife
Both young and old have come to be
Part of his kissing family

He built a town around a kiss
A chocolate town you can’t resist
It’s filled with flowers of delight
And wreaks of chocolate day and night

And there he built a home to care
For children who were in despair
He showers them with love that’s true
And pockets full of kisses too

He built a park for us to come
And have a family day of fun
If you go to this town of bliss
You’ll get a Hershey chocolate kiss

Elizabeth Santos

© Copyright 2000 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved
Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
1 posted 2000-08-25 09:51 AM


Hi Liz,

Always such a sweet delight to take in your poetry my friend.

Love and a kiss, Cerenity

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
2 posted 2000-08-25 10:01 AM


Ah, such a wonderful and delightful poem, this one...

Liz, you are amazing...

regards,
sudhir

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
3 posted 2000-08-25 10:10 AM


all I could think of was Willie Wonka when I read this..beautifully expressed.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Denise
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4 posted 2000-08-25 10:09 PM


Delightful and beautiful, Elizabeth!! I must go there one of these days!

Denise

BSC
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since 2000-02-04
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5 posted 2000-08-25 10:14 PM


I could smell the chocolate in this one Liz, what a delightfully "sweet" poem.  Bonnie
Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
6 posted 2000-08-29 01:47 AM


Hehe, yum. ^^ Aw, I love this Liz! ^^ so sweet.. *_^

sorry, i haven't been here for a while.. a lot of homework etc.. I will try to catch up on all the posts..

Love,
Lynne

blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO
7 posted 2000-08-29 01:48 PM


Yummy!  Liz, this is cute!  Don't you just love those guys who love to kiss?

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
8 posted 2000-08-29 02:59 PM


I've never read the story of Hershey written so delightfully ! Wonderful, Liz ... 'S'
(Hugs)

Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
9 posted 2000-08-30 07:05 AM


*reaches for nearby hersey kisses*  Scruptious and sweet.. I really enjoyed this..  

With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.

Moon Dust
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since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK
10 posted 2000-08-30 05:57 PM


MMMMM... Chocolate and kisses too. That would be heaven

"Those who will not learn to use this instrument well cannot be saved by an expanded alphabet; they will only afflict us with expanded gibberish"
~

Romy
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida
11 posted 2000-08-30 07:42 PM


My favorite combination! Thanks for the sweet poem!
Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
12 posted 2000-08-30 08:29 PM


Thank you all very much for your very sweet comments. And here's a kiss for each one of you
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
Liz

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
13 posted 2000-08-31 07:07 PM


Elisabeth,
Just had to stop for a kiss. Love Sy

Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
14 posted 2000-09-01 03:30 AM


LizzieGal~
Yum !  Yum !

Sure sent me in search of a bag
of those delightful morsels !
I like the *Hugs* and *Kisses*
wrapped around the almonds !

Just yummy !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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