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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
As I look into your eyes I see the ruins of my youth Where dreams were real the Eagle flies We were the ones who knew the truth The baton passed is in good hands A quick young eye to spot the swerve The race is on to see who stands And who will fall …who’s got the nerve The battle you’ll fight with relish now While the splendour of the victory calls When anguish wrinkles your young brow The trophies won will deck your halls But keep the contest straight and true Don’t bend the rules just play the game So when recollections visit you The ghost of torment you can tame A fighter young he feels no pain He sees no suffering tastes no blood But let me tell you once again A victory won’s not always good When in penultimate rest you lay Reflecting on the battle ground How long and cheerless is the day If you have cheated every round No! Lift your head and keep it true Seek the victory… play it fair So no one can recall of you There was a hollow contest there Pick up the baton run your race Let every step be firm and strong I hope the sun shines on your face And victory heralds a happy song Jon Mewett |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Jon; This is a wise and loving father whose child is blessed to have such a one. Doubly blessed that he is a gifted poet besides. Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Jon, Great message put in beautiful verse. I believe this is my first piece to see on the subject matter. Cheating, of any fashion, never wins! Very good! Marcy |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Thanx Ellie and Marcy ..............your warm comments are appreciated ![]() Jon |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
A very touching message, Jon. Your son is blessed ![]() |
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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
excellent message in a wonderful poem. i alkways did dig your stuff "freedom is just another word for nothing left to lose..." -janis joplin |
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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
excellent message in a wonderful poem. i alkways did dig your stuff "freedom is just another word for nothing left to lose..." -janis joplin |
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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
excellent message in a wonderful poem. i alkways did dig your stuff "freedom is just another word for nothing left to lose..." -janis joplin |
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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
excellent message in a wonderful poem. i alkways did dig your stuff "freedom is just another word for nothing left to lose..." -janis joplin |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Very touching, indeed. You are a very loving father, I'm sure. Alicia |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wow! What a beautiful, lovely, touching prayer/poem! Wow! You should definitely get this published! I think this would be great on cards and plates and plaques, Wow! I wish I had written this!!! WOW! Denise |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Wow Jon, I totally agree with Denise, this should be published! If it's ok with you I would like to print it out, I've got a couple of boys here I'd like to read it. Bonnie |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Thanx everybody...............thanx Denise your great reply is special indeed...you too Bonnie .........print away. My son gradutated last month and has recently moved to the big city....you bring them up and then you have to let go....I felt that I had surely handed over the baton to the next generation it was elating and frightening all at the same time....and so the poem was born......it just kinda flowed...glad you all like it. Jon |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jon~ This is wonderfully done. So encouraging and full of spirit. I'd be proud to share it with a group of teens that I mentor - May I ? ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Thanx Marge.........you can surely do that ...it sorta makes me proud...thanyou all so much ![]() Jon |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you, Jon. They will find it inspirational. And you should be proud ! ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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