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Nocturnal Moment (haiku)

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

0 posted 2000-08-19 09:06 AM

starlight glittering
above swaying willow
nightengale sings
< !signature-->

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

[This message has been edited by pegasus111 (edited 08-19-2000).]

BSC

Moderator

Member Elite

since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

1 posted 2000-08-19 09:09 AM

So few words bringing such a lovely image to the mind....This is great. Bonnie

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

2 posted 2000-08-19 09:19 AM

lovely picture youve painted

dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

3 posted 2000-08-19 12:04 PM

This is wonderful, you did a great job

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

4 posted 2000-08-19 03:13 PM

Thanks for the kind words Lakewalker, dg, BSC

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

5 posted 2000-08-19 07:27 PM

now if only the nightingale sings to me a lullably outside my window before i sleep

lovely haiku here

juliet_2u
Senior Member

since 2000-07-23

Posts 1125
North Carolina

6 posted 2000-08-19 11:15 PM

I tell ya, I'm in love with this haiku stuff. Great job.
Juls

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

7 posted 2000-08-20 07:47 AM

I must echo my fellow poets, NICELY DONE. I enjoyed experiencing this moment...through your eyes.

INclan

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