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BSC

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since 2000-02-04

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0 posted 2000-08-18 03:48 PM

Delicate blossom
floating gently on the pond
precious lily pad

[This message has been edited by BSC (edited 08-18-2000).]

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

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High Springs, Florida

1 posted 2000-08-18 04:02 PM

wonderful little haiku!!

i wish i were a frog

dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran

Lakewalker
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On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2000-08-18 05:16 PM

What a wonderful thought, thanks for sharing

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

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King of Prussia, PA USA

3 posted 2000-08-18 06:35 PM

Bon; Precious Haiku! Lovely!
ok, this is what I've learned...Haiku's are about nature and Senryu's are about feelings.
love ya, ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09

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NEW ENGLAND, USA

4 posted 2000-08-18 08:03 PM

Bonnie,
you are quickly becoming another Haiku Hero- like several others keep sharing the precious gems that you bring to light. David

"GOD GIVES- but man must open his hand." (German Proverb)

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

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singapore

5 posted 2000-08-18 10:12 PM

well,dg, you dont have to be a frog to appreciate this gem

lovely haiku

Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

6 posted 2000-08-18 11:09 PM

Bonnie, What a lovely thought. So serene and silent, all that beauty floating in the water. This may be one of my favorites. It's a real beauty. Marcy

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2000-08-19 04:31 AM

Bonnie~

Lily of the pond
Serenity's white blossom
A floating beauty

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

8 posted 2000-08-19 04:56 AM

Lovely Bonnie......Ilike this a lot

Jon

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

9 posted 2000-08-19 12:01 PM

Bonnie,
You are doing so well with this form of poetry! Keep up the good work! I like your style!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

juliet_2u
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North Carolina

10 posted 2000-08-19 10:25 PM

Bonnie, simply wonderful, but I expect nothing less from you.
Juls

INclan
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Indiana, USA

11 posted 2000-08-20 07:50 AM

Go...
Bonnie
Go...

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