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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
The August rains < !signature-->started today, I long for her in every way. Hoping she sees my smile praying love will stay a while. Getting ready sweet red wine, as the clock tolls the time. The fire burns in the hearth as she knocks to be heard. A small smile on her face melts my heart this rainy day. A shy hello from her lips tender, smooth, and long to be kissed. Taking her by her hearts’ desire leading her by the fire. Slowly filling full her wine glass she grins again and lightly laughs. Feeling passion build inside the fires’ glow her eyes to wide. A tender kiss to help begin the music of love once again Singing to a private song. passionate love for us it longs. With gentle moves by loves grace the restricting clothes is stripped of place They lay scattered on the floor so our true love may endure. The sensuous feels and wondrous touch of skin so soft, lead by love. Kissing her tender lips moving down every inch of her soft sweet skin kissing and loving every bit. I slowly reach her mountain tops and suckle sweetly her firm love as the movements down below Long to find her valleys’ floor. With a rhythm slow to start following the dance with our hearts. The passion does pick up the beat as her heart sings to me. With loving groans filling the air The passion deep as we prepare The moment of our passions spree Our loving hearts increase their beat. With a final search so deep I feel her shudder strong beneath knowing that I, thus could please the lady with, eyes of green. We lay in love the rest of the night reveling by the fire side. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." [This message has been edited by kelieth (edited 08-19-2000).] |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
Completely romantic! I really like... "the fires’ glow her eyes to wide." Shows attention to detail... a noticing of every move your lover makes. -jaimie www.ladysixstring.com |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Whoa .........real hot in here...a poem that says hot indeed... nice Jon |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
WOOHOO!! we might have to move your passion to the adult forum there buddy! very nice ..very passionate.. more more!! dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Ummm well, WOW, lol. Man this is smokin. I do think I'm a bit flushed now. And as Jon so elegantly put it....whoa..hehe. Great read. Juls |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
kevin- WOW!! Incredible passion and romance. Really like this...is it just me, or is it a little warm in here? -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
heehee..yeah, its a little warm in here tricks! fires are burnin'!! kevin is...WEE-DOGGIES!! dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Hi there,...I believe this is the first of your work I have had the pleasure of reading. *sigh*,...my oh my what a read it is! Wonderfully passionate. Totally captivating. Enjoyed. Take care now. *Peace. |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Kevin, A beautiful read of passions dance and shared romance! This IS HOT! Dennis :^) |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Ignore me with my camera hidding in the wardrobe, I lost my glasses, yes my glasses...Kevin, I am sorry you were using the bedromm for..ER Hello...Are not going to introduce me to your lovely lady friend..Ok just leaving. LOL seriously a very sensual and beautiful poem, any chance of getting my camera back? "Beyond all this good is the terror,The grip of a mercenary hand,When savagery turns all good reason, There's no turning back, no last stand,"I.Curtis |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Thank you all for responding to my poem here Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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