The Corner Pub |
songs of time |
dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
..my grandfather...was very handy he had this little bar he built in the corner of his garage..he'd entertain friends..and family..and often he and his brothers would get together and play music..as he got older, the bar began sitting empty more and more...this is its story ---------------------------------------- ancient whiskey bottles standing tall amidst dust and spiders weave. bottles of crystal glistening shyly holding memory of days gone by. replicated laughter bellows from within obscure smiles-- and tears of some... liquid innards splash to the music and gently glide with the dance... though still now, the music has stopped and quiet, the laughter is silenced you must believe in the ancient stories you must listen close to hear-- but listen. listen with your heart-- dont miss the songs of time. -dgvarner "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
This is so soft and warm .....lovely memories DGV....lovely poem.. Jon |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
This was lovely dg..a soothing read..thanks for sharing it. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Wow, this is a story so nicely told. I'm putting this one away to read again later, it's great! |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
jon, peg, lake: thanks for your warm replies! this one has a bunch of special mind- pictures that accompany it for me..i hope you got a glimpse of them dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
I love this!! how sweet memories can be..this is an excellent poem, I really enjoyed it!...........beth You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
Dg, you've made me realize just how precious moments every moment really is...How much I'm going to miss my first house (which entertained 20-40 people any given night) and all my friends...how I have to hold on right now to what I've got before my laughter fades, and the music slowly dies away. Thankyou so much! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Yet more beauty, in the silence of remembered laughter and song. Truly a gift I'm in Dee heaven! |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Yes, I really savoured this one. Beautiful... |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
dg, I like the thoughts behind this poem and the thoughts it brought to my mind. Excellent writing I really enjoyed |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
dg, So lovely and soft. Special memories. Very well written. marcy |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
big thanks to all of you responding to this one !! much appreciate the attention youre giving to the memories of my papaw's corner "pub"!! dg< !signature--> "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 08-18-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DGVarner~ What a delightful read. How nice of you to save me a stool at 'pawpaws' corner pub ! I hear the laughter bouncing off the walls. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
marge: isnt it great! the laughter..the smiles..the raspy voices of papaw and his brothers...the banjo, the guitar, auto harp, violen, harmonica......WOW! i hope you enjoy it as much as i ... thanks for pulling up a stool marge! dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
dg great piece Enjoyed reading it so serene. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i am listening with my heart now and hoping earnestly i dont miss anything... liked this muchly...through your poem, i feel as though i have a weeny glimpse into another world.... |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
kevin: glad you enjoyed reading me thanks! kaile: keep listening..i might have more tucked away i'll share with you dg< !signature--> "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 08-21-2000).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- sorry i was so slow in responding to this. i really love it. reminded me of being there...getting to meet your papaw. love ya, tricks "I have read your words, and within them I have found your heart. -vlraynes |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
thanks tricks ...wish we could do that trip again! dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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