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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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A seed content to be disposed by the mighty winds Spouting out roots cheerfully regardless of where it lands It only spreads its branches soaring high up towards the magical sapphire skies, yearning for a piece of heavens above |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
A fellow "Free Spirit"! This is a lovely poem & written so well!.......beth You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely, Kaile!  Denise |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thanx Lady Lost, i was afraid that no one would understand what i am trying to refer to but now, i see that my fears are unfounded denise, thanx for replying |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
kaile, Beautiful! So few words says so much. I loved that seed. Very well done. Marcy |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
Wonderful!! -jaimie www.ladysixstring.com |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Perfect simplicity Kalie, spreading out and reaching for the top....beautiful. Bonnie |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
exellent scene and imagry. Loved it. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Kaile, a beautiful poem. thanks for taking part in the challenge. "Beyond all this good is the terror,The grip of a mercenary hand,When savagery turns all good reason, There's no turning back, no last stand,"I.Curtis |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
This poem reminds me of you... The front part, at least, where the seed is content to be disposed by the winds... Just like you, the indifference, or the huge heart ( whichever sounds better to you) which makes you not as petty as many others. _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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