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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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A desolate leaf Wonders why he should hold on When others have fell |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Kaile, Seeing others gone While he still just hangs around Makes him feel lonley Good one! Good to see you posting here again! Dennis :^) |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
kaile; this is so lovely! intrepid bright one you have courage to hang on till winters first frost Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Great one Kalie...You were the first one I'd seen post these little gems, I didn't have a clue about how to write them, I'm still trying to get the hang of it, but it's been fun trying. Bonnie |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Another great one, it's wonderful. Ah, to be the last. |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
*chuckle, chuckle*.. ^_^ hey kaile, read my poem "Darling?!".. u have just inspired me to post it.. (I did write it ages ago, hehe..) This is neat!! -Lynne |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
fall ever quickly one more after the other which will be the last ok..so that wasnt a great one!! loved yours tho!!  dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kaile~ Last on limb to fall Lays on the top of the heap First to jump for Spring ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Why should he let go if he has the strength to hold on? Though he might be lonely, he might be the only one who could bring life back to the tree. It might take just one leaf to start producing food under the sun, thus reviving the tree. So, another lesson here is, never give up hope until the very very last second. Maybe you shouldn't even give up then, but just never give up til everything is absolute. _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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