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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa 
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a beauty slumbers the moonbeam's sweet kiss white lightning dreams the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
beautiful...very *of course I am Moon partial ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Very nice, I love it  |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
very beautiful pegasus! White lightning shoots forth In a sea of unkept dreams Night shows no mercy what do you think??? "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Pegasus111, Quite a contrast between, beauty slumbers, Moonbeam's sweet kiss and white lightning dreams! I'm sure you're talking about intensity and not moonshine, LOL, Interesting combination of images. Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
yes, Dennis..not booze..lol sweetcollege_girl..I like the variation..very nice the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
thanks..that was my first shot at haiku |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Simply beautiful. Bonnie |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Thanks, Bonny.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
I really liked the cool feel of this. calming and peaceful and moonfilled. A beautiful quiet moment in a world of stress. Lovely... allan  |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
and the sleeping beauty sleeps on peacefully |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
this is wonderful..i love it!! dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Nicely done, Pegasus111. If I may be so bold...here is how you poem struck me: a beauty slumbers the moonbeam's sweet kiss transfiguration Best Regards, INclan |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Positively lovely ...I liked the contrasting images. Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
I'm in a dreamy mood today...this suits me well. "Come...dance with me, into my world of words." |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very beautiful. I liked it!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Soft and fragile - your haiku paints a delicate image. Well done |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Ah! Well Done! |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
lovely image! |
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