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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Baptism Haiku Cool refreshing pond Returning often to bathe Quenching thirst for life |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Lovely dip...... ![]() Jon |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Marcy, This one is a good and thought provoking haiku-where the waters run deep to soothe the soul. Keep it up, friend--you're doing fine! David |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marcy~ Baptismal water Renewing faith in my soul Washes over me *Thank you for your words of inspiration. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Marcy; This is so lovely. Great job, and so inspiring. Love, ellie |
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Marcy, I am amazed at how so few words can say so much, this is wonderful. Bonnie |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
So nicely put in so few words, amazing. |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Marcy, Is this skinny dipping of the soul? Peaceful and serene! Nice Haiku! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Your pool... ...so cool ![]() |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Very nice Haiku, Marcy! ![]() "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart some |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Oh, I thank each one of you who read and replied. It does so encouraging me and I appreciate you. This is a super place with great people and I enjoy all your poems/posts/replies..... ![]() ![]() |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
such a tranquil little piece...thanx for sharing ![]() |
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