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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Baptism Haiku Cool refreshing pond Returning often to bathe Quenching thirst for life |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Lovely dip......  Jon |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Marcy, This one is a good and thought provoking haiku-where the waters run deep to soothe the soul. Keep it up, friend--you're doing fine! David |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marcy~ Baptismal water Renewing faith in my soul Washes over me *Thank you for your words of inspiration. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Marcy; This is so lovely. Great job, and so inspiring. Love, ellie |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Marcy, I am amazed at how so few words can say so much, this is wonderful. Bonnie |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
So nicely put in so few words, amazing. |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Marcy, Is this skinny dipping of the soul? Peaceful and serene! Nice Haiku! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Your pool... ...so cool  |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Very nice Haiku, Marcy!  "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart some |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Oh, I thank each one of you who read and replied. It does so encouraging me and I appreciate you. This is a super place with great people and I enjoy all your poems/posts/replies..... |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
such a tranquil little piece...thanx for sharing |
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