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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road ![]() |
like glittering bugs tiny flashes in the dark haikus find the light [This message has been edited by allan (edited 08-15-2000).] |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~You are one groovy guy Allan! I dig all you write. I find it all very worthwhile. Keep 'em coming please. Take care. *Peace. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Very cool ![]() |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Your message so bright The glittering bugs in flight Flickering their lights I enjoyed the analogy of the Lightening bug's light to Haiku's. Good job (couldn't help myself with a little follow up) ![]() |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
"tiny flashes in the dark" that they are! this is so great allan! i love it ![]() dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Big thanks for all your kind comments! allan ![]() |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Allan; This is delightful! Very clever too. Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
nice Allan..enjoyed the fluorescent color,also ~~smiles Maureen |
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Allan, Love the simple beauty in this one, and I love those little fireflies. Bonnie |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Allan, Haiku twinkles are ideal for us burnouts with the short attention spans, LOL.....now what was I saying, oh yeah, Good poem! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
How delightful, allan! ![]() This reminds me of those green and bronze scarab beetles that buzz around my garden in Spring. And of glow worms, too. And of your poems. ![]() Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
supurb analogy allan... ![]() the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
an one written for all haiku lovers...very nice ![]() ![]() |
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