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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Yesterday's Weeds Did you see the roadway back there? I missed it too but felt it swallow me, who's fiddle could I have played anyway? Welcome mat of many denials inhabits, trudges over me like yesterday's weeds, can you taste the acid rain born in me? Laid before full moon's captured breath, left crying the howl as emptiness calls, have you seen the ferocious lion roar? It's me, I spit at their feet begging notice a lowly creature stripped of earthly worth, when the beam of light darkens I'm gone. |
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The Alchemist Junior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 10 |
Incredible piece, Dreamer. Sad, yes, but that is part of life.  The Alchemist [This message has been edited by The Alchemist (edited 08-15-2000).] |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Ria, I know you are sad right now. You have great friends who will be there for you during anything. You did a great job with this piece. Dawn |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Wow LD this is really good .....I could feel your anger and sadness ...great writing....it'll pull you through. Jon |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
LD, Truly well written. Sad.. but we learn from our unpleasant situations and move on, wiser, though feeling weak-stronger! A wonderful job of writing. Marcy |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Lost Dreamer, This is a sad poem, one of rejection and despair, but as long as you are surronded by GOOD friends that beam of light will NEVER darken, We won't allow it! Your poem is a good expression of loss but it hints of hope, grab it and hold on! Dennis :^) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very sad, Gloria. HUGS Denise |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
The title caught my eye. Like! Well written indeed. I especialy liked how you wrapped it up.. "when the beam of light darkens I'm gone." Joy |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I thank you all most kindly for your kind responses. I've been through a bit of turmoil lately, but things are looking better now. : ) |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
LD wow, powerful piece, stunning images. a powerful read, I wish you peace and hope that things work out. Thanks for sharing. "Beyond all this good is the terror,The grip of a mercenary hand,When savagery turns all good reason, There's no turning back, no last stand,"I.Curtis |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
wow..this is awesome..i really enjoyed reading this... good wishes to you  dg"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
boy, this was a powerful intense read....i do feel glad that you are feeling better now.... hope all is well and fine with you |
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