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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
In My Eyes (haiku) You’re still beautiful like the fresh flowers of spring blooming in summer Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
a very pleasant read the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Simply enchantingly romantic! ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Jamie, Beauty surpasses single seasons and endures! Nice Haiku! Dennis :^) |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very nice jamie and look, now YOU're in OUR eyes! ..good to see you dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Amazing as usual, I loved it |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Jamie,...(may I call you that?)...this haiku makes me smile. Your words,...so sweet. Your heart...huge. Take care P. *Peace. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Enjoyed |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
I liked this one, good job. Marcy |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely and sweet! |
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The Alchemist Junior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 10 |
I've got to try writing haikus...they seem like a lot of fun, and a lot of people are doing great jobs with them! You're one of them. The Alchemist |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
sweet and warm Jamie wonderful! |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Thanks everyone... this one was written for somebody, who in my eyes,is as pretty now as they were 20 years ago... thanks again for the kindness you all show Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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