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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470
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A cold breeze kisses my face < !signature-->as I step outside today, a season close to its end; hot days and nights fade away. Soon the leaves will start to fall and magnificent colors will shine, The nights will become long; leaving summer memories behind. You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore [This message has been edited by Lady Lost (edited 08-14-2000).] |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Beth, This is a beautiful poem, expressing a transition, but is it really about the seasons......or something else? Good writing! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Beth; So lovely! I too feel that those summer memories you are leaving behind say so much. Beautiful job! Love, Mom Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very lovely, Beth! Denise |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Beth..I live in florida so have a way to go yet..lol..this is a great piece. well done.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Wow, what an image I'm seeing now, this is fantastic!  |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
oh so many memories were made this summer. Memories I don't wanna leave behind.  I loved this.Dawn |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Beth, Those summer memories left behind replaced with the beautiful colors of fall. Such a beautiful piece. Bonnie |
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Darkened Treasures Junior Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 18nj |
Still a tad bit of summer to add to those memories...thank goodness! I like that pic, hmm...seems a bit familar, like I have seen it before. Who would have thought a good little girl like you could destroy my beautiful wickedness. |
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Poertree Senior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359UK |
I love poems expressing pictures of nature .. this is a nice little poem beth.. thanks P |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Beautiful Beth, and I only wish it was leaving summer memories behind.. I think they'll be staying with me still...  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oooooh I love the Autumn, my favourite time of year, you captured the changing of seasons well Beth Lovely, well done! Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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