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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Who grasps my hand with warm affection? What gentle face invades the mind's reflection? Whose petal lips brush mine ere gently? What musky scent reeks love intently? Blackest pools long lashed enfolding, silken flesh so raptly holding, whispered breathing, warm spring breezes, love's ecstacy, pray nere it eases. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
This is a beautiful poem and it is written so well! I really enjoyes this piece.....beth You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautifully done, Pegasus! Denise |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Beth, Denise..thank you for the kind words the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I really enjoyed this one, it's beautiful. |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Thanks for the read, Lakewalker.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
Was wandering in the back pages and found peg's first poem. It is so lovely in its words that it deserves a reread. -wordancer |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is so lovely. (I keep wondering how I have missed some beautiful poems and have found out that these have been brought back by some kind hearted reader in the archives.) Thank you. Joyce |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Glad this was brought back up! You sure have a way with couplets, Peg, and this poem definitely warmed things up around here! To love another person is to see the face of God. |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Great form and feeling. Messenger of gods. Thanks for pulling up the thread. "The only thing new in the world, is the history we don't know." |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh beautifully written Pegasus love it! Maree |
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Red_Feather Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 131The Vagabond Sea |
What musky scent reeks love intently?....Indeed. How primal and exotic the smell of love and lovers. You've a serious fire in your blood my friend. One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Great piece! |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Phew, I'm just going to open a window in here, k? ^^ loved reading this piece of romance here Peg.. -Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
This is sooooo lovely! beautifully written as well, Peg. Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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