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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
Break me Afterall I'm just a man Make me I will never do it again Take me I've givin' it all I can Fake me If thats all that I've ever been I wasn't your only one I knew before we were done You couldn't look into my eyes And I could see through your lies Break me Make me Take me Fake me |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
ouch wob! this one just hurts....  good writing though  dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
It hurt living it too. Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed! |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
'Very potent. You really got to the heart Bob. And I loved the format. |
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
WHBob - Ouch is right! No mincing the words here. This is great. Bonnie |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
Thanks Allan and Bonnie for reading and replying. I guess the truth of the matter is is that expression isn't always happy and niether am I. Glad you enjoyed! |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
A spear of truth in response to cupids arrow. And the point was sharp> Nice one Jon |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
A pointed statement Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
What a good read. Everyone can't be happy all the time so poetry doesn't have to be either. Great poem |
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