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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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That's It Silence fills the rooms and halls And I alone among these walls A time alone to contemplate Of here and now, and not of fate The silence is to me a sound Within hearts chambers firmly pounds Reminding me the endless drone That I am truly home alone And when I see my empty plight I scramble to turn on that light I hit the web and there I sit And that is just the end of it Elizabeth Santos |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Oh this reminds me of a time I was home alone and the power went out at night. Chilling, but great work. Dawn |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
No better way to spend your time, especially when you're home alone!  Denise |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and that is such a joy to me...enjoyed this much of course, and I am studying your style, Elizabeth...perfect meter, every time....in awe. |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
Great rhyme, Liz! Yes, we all need a slice of time on our own eh? - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Liz: I hear what you are saying here. Being alone can be lovely and sometimes not. Thank goodness for the poetry! This, my dear friend, is so beautifully written, as usual! love, ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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